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Purr human vertion that use a kimono
I took the brushes at Brusheezy long time ago
I don't remember who is by, when I find the owner, I'll cretid him

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:iconpandablubb:
I really like the colorsheme you used in this because of the soft pastel tones, which fit a cute character like her. The background is simple but very fitting and same goes for the pattern on her kimono/Yukata.
Her pose is nice and her legs look stunning. The undersite of the right one (from viewers point of view) is a bit off though because the curve is too far in the direction of the knee.
The shoulder and décolleté region is beautiful and I have to say: you know how to draw boobs. ahem.
Her upper body is far too long though if you compare the space from shoulder to butt with the length of the legs Or the place of the Obi (wich should fit from the undersite of the breast to a bit above the navel perhaps) with the rest of the upper body.
Her face looks very cute but the eyelashes look a bit strange.

But altogether a very beautiful picture with a very cute character
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:iconkonykonkon:
Very good. :clap: I'd Critique you but I would just end up talking nonsense. XD

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I love my little kwitty! :heart: She is my everything!
:iconbemused-dreamer:
This is very cute. The things I see that might be off are the legs and arms.

With the legs, it looks like one of the legs attaches at a higher point of the body than the other. I'm not really sure how to phrase this, sorry. If you really want, I could draw a red-line to illustrate what I mean, but...

With the arms, it seems as if they just suddenly disappear. I'm guessing she has them folded across her stomach or something? But there's no indication of that.

I really like the color combination you used (I'm a sucker for soft/lighter color combos).
:icontora-shiromaru:
yeah, is truth :3 is not proportional I saw this too,
looks like that the trunk of the body was too long (for the error about her legs :3) well...for the arms because that kimono is too long, in the arms part and her arms are covered by it :3

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* Sorry for my english
I'm Argentinian
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Moe Japan!
♪♫ Furry and Robot rulez!♫♪
:iconthegloriesbigj:
Glories work keep it up!! :D

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:icontora-shiromaru:
Thanks you very much ^3^

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* Sorry for my english
I'm Argentinian
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Moe Japan!
♪♫ Furry and Robot rulez!♫♪
:icontora-shiromaru:
ahah no problem XD

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* Sorry for my english
I'm Argentinian
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Moe Japan!
♪♫ Furry and Robot rulez!♫♪
:iconthegloriesbigj:
Your Welcome Tora!! :)

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Look at these muscles do they lie to you?

I am the Glories JS. I am 6'ft9in. I am 347 pounds of pure muscle, some what.
:iconmoonfight:
Sie sieht schön aus. ^^d good work!

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:icontora-shiromaru:
thank you ^3^

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* Sorry for my english
I'm Argentinian
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Moe Japan!
♪♫ Furry and Robot rulez!♫♪

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